03-04-2008, 05:32 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by heX
I laughed at the first one, then as it went on it became less and less funny. maybe work in some form of charecter developement. you dont have to abandon the punch line, just recur a refference or two. make it more linear and less random.
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