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Old 02-20-2007, 04:22 PM   #8
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I would suggest changing the about page from this:
Name: Jesse Potter.
Age: 21.
Location: Waterville/Bangor Maine. Boston for the summer of 2007.

to this:
Name: Jesse Potter.

Age: 21.

Location: Waterville/Bangor Maine. Boston for the summer of 2007.


just makes it easier to read when there are spaces between all that stuff.



it could use more explosions and mutants and cyborgs, but other than that, looks ok.


I would also change "I haven't received lower than an 'A' in any of my major courses. " to "I received a 4.0 GPA in my major."
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