advice
 

I'm entering this in a contest, cuz its a "light" verse contest and this is all i got to offer. Any suggestions would be appreciated.


The Wolf was Framed!

Wolf was a loyal dog, woman

I liked it, short and sweet oozing with wit and besides I always knew Little Red Riding Hood was guilty! I am just glad someone brought it out into the light. I would watch my back from now on though, or go into some protective custody cause word around the woods is that Littl' Miss Hood is a made woman and well "connected". Good luck in your contest, and your new life. ;)

Just change en, to an evil leer :P

lol

i wanna know why the hell grammar check missed that.

fixed.

Cause someone (^) didn't want to spend the few extra bucks to get an Optimus powered spell checker...and then you dare to ask why?

i may have been drinking, but i enjoyed it.

Criticism Desperately Needed
 

Static

I want to conquer Europe
And the entire world